Post by sabrierkisi on Feb 11, 2005 12:12:51 GMT -5
I am from Turkey as you know, and I ain't a english speaker. This is an english poem and i wrote it. I am open to you suggestions. 
I woke up early this morning.
I dont think it hurt me.
No one knows how I'm feeling.
I tought I gotta leave.
To somewhere never been.
Than I focused on a single thing.
To forgot all my meaning.
Heard the mindcrushing sing.
I wander without my body to findout why I'm wandering
I arrived there where i care.
There was aware that I was blind.
It's all because I were thinking
Something was sitting near the monument of tought
Even it dont know about lenght of faith
It was not early but not so late
You could pray but no one will appriciate
As long as your faith fade
I woke up early this morning.
I dont think it hurt me.
No one knows how I'm feeling.
I tought I gotta leave.
To somewhere never been.
Than I focused on a single thing.
To forgot all my meaning.
Heard the mindcrushing sing.
I wander without my body to findout why I'm wandering
I arrived there where i care.
There was aware that I was blind.
It's all because I were thinking
Something was sitting near the monument of tought
Even it dont know about lenght of faith
It was not early but not so late
You could pray but no one will appriciate
As long as your faith fade
