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Post by sabrierkisi on Feb 11, 2005 12:12:51 GMT -5
I am from Turkey as you know, and I ain't a english speaker. This is an english poem and i wrote it. I am open to you suggestions. I woke up early this morning. I dont think it hurt me. No one knows how I'm feeling. I tought I gotta leave. To somewhere never been. Than I focused on a single thing. To forgot all my meaning. Heard the mindcrushing sing. I wander without my body to findout why I'm wandering I arrived there where i care. There was aware that I was blind. It's all because I were thinking Something was sitting near the monument of tought Even it dont know about lenght of faith It was not early but not so late You could pray but no one will appriciate As long as your faith fade
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Post by korundgen on Aug 18, 2006 22:48:16 GMT -5
thank you for sharing your poem Sabrierkisi. I enjoy your writing very much keep em coming I have always wanted to go to turkey if you are ever in montana look me up.
your friend, Korundgen
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